Read it before
anyone else does.
Then tell me what's wrong.
The manuscript is locked. Before it goes to print, I want 50 agents inside the Tribe and a handful of trusted referrals to read it and give structured feedback. Not "did you like it." Where you stopped. Which exercises you actually did. What you'd cut.
What I need from you,
specifically.
"Did you like it" tells me nothing. These three things tell me everything I need to know to make the book better before it launches.
Where did you stop?
Note the chapter and the page where you lost momentum, set it down, or skipped ahead. That's the section that needs the most work. Don't be polite about it.
Which exercises did you actually do?
There are ten exercises across the book. If you skipped one, tell me which and why. If one changed how you think about your business, tell me that too. The book lives or dies on whether the work gets done.
What would you cut?
Every chapter has a section that's weaker than the rest. Tell me which paragraphs felt like padding, which examples didn't land, which transitions confused you. Be ruthless. Your edit is more valuable than your praise.
21 days, start to finish.
Tight on purpose. Tight forces actual reading. Loose lets it sit on your nightstand for two months. Here's the four-step flow.
Sign up
Fill out the short application below. Two minutes. I'm looking for agents who'll actually read it and respond, not just collect a free copy.
Get the PDF
Once you're accepted, you get the full manuscript as a watermarked PDF. Bonus: the 10 companion exercises from /freedom for working through it.
Read & mark up
Read at your normal pace. Mark places where you stopped, sections that worked, paragraphs that didn't. Do the exercises if you want, skip what doesn't apply.
Send the feedback
Fill out the feedback form linked in your acceptance email. Should take 15-20 minutes. The more specific, the better.
It's a real ask,
so this is a real exchange.
The manuscript, before anyone else
Full PDF of the finished book delivered straight to you. Read it before it hits print or Amazon.
An invitation to the launch event
Live launch event at Jacksonville Golf & Country Club. Beta readers get the first invitations and reserved seats.
50 spots.
First come, first read.
Spots fill on a rolling basis. The application is two minutes. If you're accepted you'll get the manuscript within 24 hours.
Questions? Email jon@movewithmomentum.com